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Ryan_Higa #1 Posted Jan 24 2014 - 06:06

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I got an idea from the Maus documentary, and I began writing this story. New post every 2-3 weeks. Enjoy! :blinky:

 

Oh and HERE'S the original Maus documentary by Otto_Weston: 

http://forum.worldof...-a-documentary/

 

 

CHAPTER 1:

 

 

 Maus drove in the endless realms around him. His own kingdom- Himmelsdorf. One of the most sought-after maps. But he wasn’t happy. He drifted into thought……..

 

There was a time, long ago, where many Mäuse ruled Himmelsdorf. They shared many maps with IS-7 and T30. Those times were amazing. But Maus took it in stride. Power creep came closer. Suddenly, the world seemed to be filled with terror. T30 became weaker and weaker, and it became a sullen ninth-tier Tank Destroyer. IS-7 fell within the clutches of T110E5, and joined with him. The T110 series was Maus’ death blow. They brought devastation to Himmelsdorf. One by one, Maus’ companions were slain. His brother, E-100, saved the German Kingdom, but then he became hungry for power. The two became bitter rivals. Maus was left to fend for himself.


 Through his scopes, he spotted a lone MT-25. Prey. Maus brought it down with one shot of his accurate gun, then proceeded to consume it. The trees were threadbare, and grass barely grew. Rolling at a slow speed, Maus prepared to spend the night. He did not look it, but Maus knew how to fight very well. After all, he had defended Himmelsdorf for so long. But Maus sometimes thought, “How much longer?”. Soon solstice would come, and the enemies would fight. Each year they fought harder. And Maus knew that if things continued, one day Himmelsdorf would no longer be his.

 

CHAPTER 2: http://forum.worldoftanks.com/index.php?/topic/324803-the-last-maus-a-story/page__pid__6459401#entry6459401



Flametz #2 Posted Jan 24 2014 - 06:12

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One shotting an MT-25? With the not-as-long 128mm?

Must be HE, or a lucky AP roll.

nevertheless nice start. I'll look forward to seeing more.



Tank_girl24 #3 Posted Jan 24 2014 - 06:13

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View PostRyan_Higa, on Jan 24 2014 - 00:06, said:

I got an idea from the Maus documentary, and I began writing this story. New post every 2-3 weeks. Enjoy! :blinky:

 

Oh and HERE'S the original Maus documentary by Otto_Weston: 

http://forum.worldof...-a-documentary/

 

 

CHAPTER 1:

 

 

 Maus drove in the endless realms around him. His own kingdom- Himmelsdorf. One of the most sought-after maps. But he wasn’t happy. He drifted into thought……..

 

There was a time, long ago, where many Mäuse ruled Himmelsdorf. They shared many maps with IS-7 and T30. Those times were amazing. But Maus took it in stride. Power creep came closer. Suddenly, the world seemed to be filled with terror. T30 became weaker and weaker, and it became a sullen ninth-tier Tank Destroyer. IS-7 fell within the clutches of T110E5, and joined with him. The T110 series was Maus’ death blow. They brought devastation to Himmelsdorf. One by one, Maus’ companions were slain. His brother, E-100, saved the German Kingdom, but then he became hungry for power. The two became bitter rivals. Maus was left to fend for himself.


 Through his scopes, he spotted a lone MT-25. Prey. Maus brought it down with one shot of his accurate gun, then proceeded to consume it. The trees were threadbare, and grass barely grew. Rolling at a slow speed, Maus prepared to spend the night. He did not look it, but Maus knew how to fight very well. After all, he had defended Himmelsdorf for so long. But Maus sometimes thought, “How much longer?”. Soon solstice would come, and the enemies would fight. Each year they fought harder. And Maus knew that if things continued, one day Himmelsdorf would no longer be his.

 

 

I like it so far :)



Ryan_Higa #4 Posted Jan 24 2014 - 06:20

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Might as well write more.....how does once every, at the most, 10 days sound?

smiley119 #5 Posted Jan 24 2014 - 06:22

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Depressing story of the little Mausy ( /_\) ... good read none the less

Tank_girl24 #6 Posted Jan 24 2014 - 06:23

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View PostRyan_Higa, on Jan 24 2014 - 00:20, said:

Might as well write more.....how does once every, at the most, 10 days sound?

take your time you can't rush genius 



Flametz #7 Posted Jan 24 2014 - 06:31

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View Postsmiley119, on Jan 24 2014 - 00:22, said:

Depressing story of the little Mausy ( /_\) ... good read none the less

Depressing how rare the Maus is nowadays...

Most of the time I see them being used as expendable walls in non-serious CW strats against sub-par clans. Blocking city streets + hulling down behind bulk with T30s and T29/T34/T32...

Lel. Funny victory, but that aside they don't seem to be very competent now compared to the newer tanks now.



Ryan_Higa #8 Posted Jan 25 2014 - 22:50

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Allright. I was in a good mood, so I wrote about T110E5. This doesn't pass for a chapter, so I'll be writing soon.

 

CHAPTER 2

 Deep in the heart of a secret base, T110E5 assembled an army where he knew nobody could find him: A forgotten ghost town- Port. Row after row of the dark force….

 

 “Rise”, commanded T110E5 in a powerful voice. “I have amassed a massive empire, destroying all in my path. But the most important providence is owned by a massive 180-ton monster: Maus.” At the mention of the name, the crowd booed and jeered.

 

“ Nothing can take the German stronghold down. Each solstice I have tried. Look at you. IS-7. FV215b.M48A1.Even you, Object 268. All of you failed. But today, our fighting force is larger and more powerful than ever. And  I have created a powerful howitzer. 2400 damage in one shot. More than you weaklings. And it is American, like I. The T92.”

 

  A hush fell over the dark warehouse. In the silent darkness, all eyes fell upon the massive howitzer. T110E5 announced the other SPG.

 

 “The T92 has a counterpart. This, based off of the Conqueror. Heavily armored, and nearly as deadly. This  is the Conqueror GC.

  This time, Maus and E-100 will be mercilessly destroyed. And Himmelsdorf shall be mine!” T110E5 roared. The crowd cheered and prepared of combat. T71, T21 and the M24 Chaffees sped into the darkness.

   

But silently, in the depth of night, Maus was already preparing for the attack. Row after row of silent E-50M super-snipers. Three E-100s, with the eldest carrying HEAT ammo. And secretly, Maus was carrying a Super-Heavy Spall Liner.

 

CHAPTER 3: http://forum.worldof...76#entry6552676



Walter_Sobchak #9 Posted Jan 26 2014 - 07:17

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View Postsmiley119, on Jan 24 2014 - 00:22, said:

Depressing story of the little Mausy ( /_\) ... good read none the less


Less depressing than the real story of the Maus.



May_Contain_Asbestos #10 Posted Jan 26 2014 - 07:26

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View PostWalter_Sobchak, on Jan 26 2014 - 01:17, said:


Less depressing than the real story of the Maus.


So true.



Torenico #11 Posted Jan 26 2014 - 16:12

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Keep it up man, as a Maus fan, I will be reading it :)

Soviet33 #12 Posted Jan 26 2014 - 23:10

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More! 

tigetank #13 Posted Jan 27 2014 - 13:52

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did u guys notice his name ryan higa :)

Ryan_Higa #14 Posted Feb 07 2014 - 01:54

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Alright. New chapter tomorrow! YAY!

Ryan_Higa #15 Posted Feb 08 2014 - 20:43

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CHAPTER 3

Only a week before the solstice, the scouts arrived in the middle of the night. The E-50M snipers sat there, and picked them off one by one.

 BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!   The scouts turned to scrap metal on the spot.

 

 On daybreak, reinforcements arrived. T30 was always there, along with T29, T32, and the Shermans. Maus noticed that some new mediums were filing in as well: a Panther with a tiny turret, two new VK30.02s, a tank that looked like a smaller Löwe, and a tank with a 9cm gun that looked pretty nice. And the tier 10 - Maus was taken aback, not by her speed, firepower, or accuracy. It was how beautiful she was. Falling out of a trance, Maus came over to Leopard and offered her a gun rammer. She gladly acknowledged the gift, and Maus designated her, along with the mini-Löwe and the Leopard PTA, as an flanker. Seeing Leopard’s beautiful features, Maus felt, for the first time in his life, the waves of passion raking over him.

   

There was still six days left - Maus knew it was enough

 

CHAPTER 3:http://forum.worldof...57#entry6727757


Edited by Ryan_Higa, Mar 06 2014 - 06:56.


EpicFoxx #16 Posted Feb 20 2014 - 04:53

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How about another Maus? I got a LOLtraktor ready.



Dorneles #17 Posted Feb 21 2014 - 13:35

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nice written. i love to see taht someone else like ma lovely Mouse.

427Arbok #18 Posted Feb 22 2014 - 03:33

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Well, I'm almost halfway up the Tech Tree, so perhaps the Maus might not be alone too long... (If I can ever log in again :dry: Damn server must be full or something, not like my garbage internet service helps at all either)

Ryan_Higa #19 Posted Feb 23 2014 - 21:37

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New chapter soon! Its gonna be twisted.

tigetank #20 Posted Mar 03 2014 - 13:08

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Cant wait to here this and then the maus super weapon appeared the WT AUF E100




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