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Dragonst0rm #41 Posted May 08 2011 - 06:45

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If you need an Upper Michigan accented deep voice, I'm your guy.  Always did love good comedic scripts done along with the theme of a video game.  The camping TD was hilarious!  I had the whole house bent double laughing when I read that out loud.  The heavy could be a PzB2 740f or T1 Heavy with all that track to get blown off.  The heavy tank could be simply called "Heavy".

Jaigenarc #42 Posted May 08 2011 - 13:02

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=D I'm really liking these ideas for themes and they should definitely be in the series but I'm looking for themes that can be fast paced and short so people don't get bored of listening to it every single time :/

Two examples of imo good series intros (taken from abridged series :P)

The theme starts at about 0:45 on each vid if you want to skip to it :/



(I liked the theme from the earlier vids of this series more but the song is the same <_<)



This is kinda what I'd want it to be like :)

Jaigenarc #43 Posted May 08 2011 - 13:14

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Despite AP tests, SOLs, and an SAT I have still come up with multiple scenes for you guys to look over :) (LOVE ME)
This is only one of them :)

(This is a crew conversation scene in a KV going up a hill)
Commander: WE AREN'T MOVING
Driver: We're only capable of 5 kph uphill
Commander: THAT'S BULLS***
Driver: Please don't hurt me
Commander: YOU THERE! Sitting in front of the... thingy... with the blinky lights.....
Radio Man: The radio?
Commander: YES! THE RADIO. What are you doing?
Radio Man: I'm monitoring the radio
Commander: Yes but what does it do?
Radio Man: It keeps us in communication with the other tanks
Commander: That sounds useless
Radio Man: No no it's very important
Commander: BULLS***! GET OUT AND PUSH!
Radio Man:.... gets out of tank
Commander: YES! We're going faster!
Driver: We've only gained 2 kph
Commander: So?
Driver: That's not a lot...
Commander: When you're only going 5, 2 more makes a big difference
Driver:...
Commander: See what a good commander I am? Everyone in my tank is useful, even the guy who sits and stares at the blinking lights...thingy... that guy
Driver: But now we don't know where the enemy tanks are
Commander: Bulls*** we can just look outside
*Explosion*
Commander: WTF!!!
Driver: Sir, I see an enemy tank

Jaigenarc #44 Posted May 08 2011 - 15:32

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Idears for Character Names:
Toby: Leopard
Troy: Some med tank (t54?)
Winston: KV (anyone see the irony?)

AdonisAleus #45 Posted May 08 2011 - 20:31

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View PostJaigenarc, on May 08 2011 - 13:14, said:

Despite AP tests, SOLs, and an SAT I have still come up with multiple scenes for you guys to look over :) (LOVE ME)
This is only one of them :)

(This is a crew conversation scene in a KV going up a hill)
Commander: WE AREN'T MOVING
Driver: We're only capable of 5 kph uphill
Commander: THAT'S BULLS***
Driver: Please don't hurt me
Commander: YOU THERE! Sitting in front of the... thingy... with the blinky lights.....
Radio Man: The radio?
Commander: YES! THE RADIO. What are you doing?
Radio Man: I'm monitoring the radio
Commander: Yes but what does it do?
Radio Man: It keeps us in communication with the other tanks
Commander: That sounds useless
Radio Man: No no it's very important
Commander: BULLS***! GET OUT AND PUSH!
Radio Man:.... gets out of tank
Commander: YES! We're going faster!
Driver: We've only gained 2 kph
Commander: So?
Driver: That's not a lot...
Commander: When you're only going 5, 2 more makes a big difference
Driver:...
Commander: See what a good commander I am? Everyone in my tank is useful, even the guy who sits and stares at the blinking lights...thingy... that guy
Driver: But now we don't know where the enemy tanks are
Commander: Bulls*** we can just look outside
*Explosion*
Commander: WTF!!!
Driver: Sir, I see an enemy tank

maybe add in a little dialog from the other Tank commanders/Radio Ops in cut aways wondering what the KV/Heavy is doing, especially after the Radio Man leaves th tank to push.

like

Toby: Radio Op, why is that KV advancing toward the Enemies main line of defense? can you raise him?

Toby's Radio Op: I cannot do it sir! no one is answering the call!

Toby's gunner: Hey, isn't that Harrison pushing the tank uphill?

Toby's Radio Op: Your kidding right?

Toby's Gunner: Well, it ain't the Commander, and their gunner is allergic to the sun, and the tank is driving forward

Toby: [Sarcastic] Another day in the army boys

Jaigenarc #46 Posted May 08 2011 - 20:47

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View PostAdonisAleus, on May 08 2011 - 20:31, said:

maybe add in a little dialog from the other Tank commanders/Radio Ops in cut aways wondering what the KV/Heavy is doing, especially after the Radio Man leaves th tank to push.

like

Toby: Radio Op, why is that KV advancing toward the Enemies main line of defense? can you raise him?

Toby's Radio Op: I cannot do it sir! no one is answering the call!

Toby's gunner: Hey, isn't that Harrison pushing the tank uphill?

Toby's Radio Op: Your kidding right?

Toby's Gunner: Well, it ain't the Commander, and their gunner is allergic to the sun, and the tank is driving forward

Toby: [Sarcastic] Another day in the army boys

LooooL, awesome. Yeah this was just a "preview" "clip" whatever you want to call it but that should definitely be in there :D

(except it won't be Toby cause at this scene he'll be "dead" and people will be disappointed when it turns out that he isn't :D)

Dragonst0rm #47 Posted May 08 2011 - 22:18

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This idea keeps getting better and better.

Jaigenarc #48 Posted May 08 2011 - 22:23

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;) glad you like it.

Also you guys, just so you know, we're gonna need a LOT of actors to be extras. Just so ya know ;)

AdonisAleus #49 Posted May 09 2011 - 19:20

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some notes i joted down last night

"Heavy" - commanded by a Zap Branigan character
http://www.youtube.c...bed/obZ4VQz2PMI

Nervous PanzerJager "Kurt"

Stereotypical New guy

EP. 1 The New Guy

Skit Idea #1: A new player joins a ragtag group of players on camponivoka. This is his story (A-Team opening)

Skit #2: Charge!
The new player declares a charge over the open ground - hampered by the teams overeager and rather nervous PanzerJager. The assault ends horribly. The New player limps back to base

Skit #3: the KV on the hill
see above posts :P

Skit #4: Base Swap
As the KV starts rolling downhill the teams forcibly BaseSwap - the ensuing hilarity is a back and forth on the radios, for the most part.

and a little script for #4

Heavy: Onwards driver, I want to feel Metal under our Tracks
(Shots pinging)
Heavy Driver: (Under Breath) if they aren't shot out beneath us
(Shots pinging)
Heavy: You really need to speak up, i can't hear you over the engine
(Shots pinging)
Heavy Gunner: Thats not the engi-
Heavy: Quiet You!

PanzerJager : Oh jeez, oh jeez - Fire the Gun!
PanzerJager Gunner: We hit them!

Teams other Heavy: Goddammit!

PanzerJager : Sorry!

New Guy: eat my Superior German engineering!

Ad-lib the other part of the team being rolled by the enemy base swap group

Heavy: wheres Harrison?

Ad-lib back and forth between the teams on the Radios

Dreadnought13 #50 Posted May 09 2011 - 21:29

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awesome.  I especially love the setting of campinovka.  could rely on a lot of trench humor for inspiration (blackadder, catch 22, etc)

jdtherocker #51 Posted May 10 2011 - 16:06

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View PostJaigenarc, on May 08 2011 - 15:32, said:

Idears for Character Names:
Toby: Leopard
Troy: Some med tank (t54?)
Winston: KV (anyone see the irony?)

Winston should be a churchill so its sir winston churchill :P

keptin #52 Posted May 10 2011 - 19:11

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Loltractors

Loltractor 1: Ok ok, game face time. I'm the cunning fox; the predator in search of his prey. I will strike with precision and decisiveness...

(upon seeing Loltractor 2 and Loltractor 3) AHH, ENEMIES! Oh jeez, oh no...ok ok, take hold of yourself. Deep breaths. I'm ready, this is what I've been training for. Alright, ammunition, check. Um, gun loaded, check. Wind velocity...ah, alright, it's...um, non-existent. Ok, focus, focus. Aiming, I've got to aim, I'm aiming now...alright, carefully...steady...*pop*.

Darn, I missed.  *pop*  Ahhh, I missed again! Curses! *pop* I keep missing!

*camera cuts to Loltractors 2 and 3*
Loltractor 2: AHHHH, OH GOD, Charlie's everywhere!
Loltractor 3: Game over man, GAME OVER!

Jaigenarc #53 Posted May 25 2011 - 23:57

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Hey guys, sorry it's been so long, been busy with school work and clan wars. I'm working a draft of the script and will be able to share it with you guys hopefully sometime next week :) I don't want to post it on the forums cause it'll be long so how do we want to share? I can send it to you guys via e-mail or Skype (which I think would be easiest) What do you guys think?

Dreadnought13 #54 Posted Jun 09 2011 - 22:31

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if its done, you could send private messages here on the forums

Jaigenarc #55 Posted Jun 09 2011 - 23:04

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Yeah but sending it to EVERYONE is very tedious since I can only send it to 5 people per message (and because it'll fill up my already crowded in box, I'm way too popular :P)

Lanzer #56 Posted Jun 10 2011 - 00:55

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Excellent idea!  I sent you a PM about it.

Alfonze #57 Posted Jun 11 2011 - 05:08

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If you still need voice actors, I'd be happy to help.  I can do an unaccented American, a southern American, someone from deep in the Appalachian Mountains, and a typical english accent.  This would also be my third or fourth recording.  I can help come up with scripts as well.

Jaigenarc #58 Posted Jun 11 2011 - 15:53

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We're still looking for people and even if we have enough voice actors we still need extras :Smile_great: And if you have any ideas please feel free to post them :)

Jaigenarc #59 Posted Jun 16 2011 - 00:59

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So pretty much I'm getting back to work on the script (editing and organizing -.-) but in the mean time, I was thinking that we could do "auditions." Pretty much send me a recording of your various voices and etc, help with deciding what characters we'd want you to do as we as help give details to current characters like their accent and stuff. In a nutshell: PM me, give me your e-mail address. I'll message you and then you send me a recording :Smile_great:

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Finished the draft script for the first episode. Those that have sent me their e-mail will receive a copy of it :Smile_great:




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