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Oushaku #1 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 04:55

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Hi, I want to share a story that I 've been writing for like 2 years (is not like is long af or something like that, it took me all that time just because I'm a really lazy person and I was only writing a few pages per year :D ) . I thought about this story when WG introduced for the first time the Berlin trio and one of our members (yukekaze) was kind of showing off the Cromwell B. in a skirmish and I was like "I'm going to write a NTR story about this", that being said, months passed, new ideas were born and  it ended up like this.

P.S: bare in mind that english is not my first language and while I can understand it, writing something on it is a different matter.

 

P.S 2: for the moment I only have the Prologue translated, and 2 drawings of the MCs. I intend to update this thread regularly (probably one time per week) and add of course new chapters and more illustrations.

 

P.S 3: I don't have le epic drawing skills nor I'm a good writer <totally not insulting himself in order to make the things easier> but I hope that people can enjoy this.

 

P.S 4: if there is anything that sounds weird in english, please, tell me and I'll fix it.

PLOT
 

 The story develops in a world where the magic and science coexist and where one of the most important sport is World of Tanks (IRL, not as an online game). Yuke and his girlfriend Crommy has to fight toghether with their clan members, againts a enemy that threatens with break their relationship and their precious world.

 

Main Characters:

Yuke:

 

Spoiler

 

Crommy
 

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 PROLOGUE

 

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Okami_Ryoko #2 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:01

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nerd.

MlCE #3 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:03

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View PostSeras_Candy, on Jun 29 2017 - 05:01, said:

nerd.

 



Twily__0_0ll #4 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:09

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View PostSeras_Candy, on Jun 29 2017 - 05:01, said:

nerd.

 



Oushaku #5 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:17

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View PostSeras_Candy, on Jun 29 2017 - 01:01, said:

nerd.

 

Did you mean weeb

Okami_Ryoko #6 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:21

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View PostOushaku, on Jun 28 2017 - 23:17, said:

 

Did you mean weeb

 

nerd

Oushaku #7 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:27

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There are so many "Seras" on this clan that I don't know who is who anymore D:

Demonic_Angel_of_Death #8 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:33

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However, I've got one complaint: I look at Crommy and can't but think...

 

(Does she got B cups because she's supposed to be a Cromwell B? Because if so that's hilarious...)


Edited by Demonic_Angel_of_Death, Jun 29 2017 - 05:33.


Oushaku #9 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:44

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View PostDemonic_Angel_of_Death, on Jun 29 2017 - 01:33, said:

 

 

However, I've got one complaint: I look at Crommy and can't but think...

 

(Does she got B cups because she's supposed to be a Cromwell B? Because if so that's hilarious...)

 

I never thought that tbh: I just wanted to make a tsundere, and a tsundere (normally) don't have too much chest.

Demonic_Angel_of_Death #10 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:46

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View PostOushaku, on Jun 28 2017 - 23:44, said:

 

I never thought that tbh: I just wanted to make a tsundere, and a tsundere (normally) don't have too much chest.

 

Tsundere: The closest character trait that one can give to describe RNG...

Oushaku #11 Posted Jun 29 2017 - 05:53

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Yes. Because the gun on the Cromwell is so damn troll, I thought  that a tsundere might be ok as the character's personality.

Edited by Oushaku, Jun 29 2017 - 05:53.





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